In The Field: Conversations With Our Contributors–Molly Tenenbaum

In The Field: Conversations With Our Contributors–Molly Tenenbaum

1. Tell us about your poems in Volume 21, “To Shade a Green We Say a Noun” and “O Pie of Grace.” How did they come to be?

To Shade a Green We Say a Noun”: I was frustrated with sea-green, forest-green, mint-green. There are so many greens! Description is so hard! I thought I’d experiment with different nouns in front of green. What new colors and concerns might emerge? Could I describe, discover, distinguish more fine shades of color? It was just after New Year’s, and I’d resolved to work on description.

O Pie of Grace”: Recipes are so picky; I wanted to argue with them. As a friend I frequently cook with says while we’re putting together fruit, butter, and sugar, “How bad could it be?”

2. What excites you as a writer? What turns you off, makes you turn away or stop reading a piece of writing?

One test: Is it more interesting to look out the window than it is to read the poem, story, essay, novel? Of course, this may be more about what’s out the window than what’s on the page, but my backyard tree and the weather are always interesting to look at. So how long can I stay on the page without suddenly needing to look up? Apologies: that’s an apples-to-oranges answer. But otherwise my answer’s the same as you’ll hear everywhere: I want surprise and sound and a balance of mystery and clarity. And to learn new things. Also, I really love sentences, so I look for interestingly formed ones.

3. What was an early experience that led to you becoming a writer?

Poems that were read to me when I was little: Edna St. Vincent Millay’s “Counting-Out Rhyme”: “Silver bark of beech, and sallow / Bark of yellow birch and yellow / Twig of willow.” And Walter de la Mare’s “Silver”: “Slowly, silently, now the moon…” In both poems, I loved how the sound created the image, and in “Counting-Out Rhyme,” how the poem was made of a list of trees, and then the poem seemed to become the trees you could see and say in your mind.

4. How does the current political climate influence your art or creative process?

I’m so angry and depressed about what’s happening in this country that all my old concerns seem irrelevant, and my new ones, well, other voices do it better. So I’m doing a lot of scribbling and journal writing and trying to figure out what my writing is in this place. I’m excited to be reading a lot of the urgent voices being published now.

5. What books, writers, art, or artists inspire you and your work? Do–or have–you had any mentors in your writing life?

One of my mentors was my aunt, who was a painter, biologist, botanist, birdwatcher, chef, hiker, adventurer, conversationalist, gardener, tea-drinker and letter-writer. She studied Zen with Suzuki Roshi, was one of the early residents at Tassajara Zen Center in California, and then studied Chinese brush painting. Her lifelong project was to use the Chinese brush to paint the plants, animals, and landscapes of Los Padres, Big Sur, and the Marin coast. It’s not like she guided or commented on my writing, but her letters to me have always been a big influence, full of description of her hiking adventures, sunsets, meals, conversations, gardening tales. The way she was, the way she observed things, the way she practiced painting, repeating a brushstroke a hundred times a day, deciding which one was best, trying to do more just like that, and then going with paper and ink into the woods, in one movement on the page, flash the brush across to make a branch. Her bay trees blowing in the wind are on the wall by my left shoulder.

Visit Molly’s website here, and purchase her latest book, Mytheria (Two Sylvias Press, 2017) here.

In The Field: Conversations With Our Contributors–Alison Morse

In The Field: Conversations With Our Contributors–Alison Morse

1. Tell us about your poem, “Dream Rematerialized in Bangladesh,” in Volume 21. How did it come to be?

I really did have a dream in which long threads that extended from my mother’s tongue were stitched through my fingertips. She spoke, my hands typed. I was her marionette. When I woke up, I thought, what a useful image. For many months, I’d been attempting to write a poem about my family’s relationship with the garment industry. The dream image gave me what I needed to enter the world of the poem.

The second half of the poem is taken from an experience I had during a research trip to Dhaka, Bangladesh. There I interviewed garment workers, mostly women, who told me stories about their work in Dhaka garment factories. I always sensed a gap between what I said in English, what the workers replied in Bangla and what the translators told me in English –– until the interview I wrote about in the poem.

2. What excites you as a writer? What turns you off, makes you turn away or stop reading a piece of writing?

I’ve learned to be a patient reader because writing that bugs me usually ends up teaching me something new about what writing can do. It’s a bit like the experience of learning to read in a foreign language. What makes no sense at first ends up expanding my fluency as a reader and writer.

3. What books, writers, art, or artists inspire you and your work? Do–or have–you had any mentors in your writing life?

My current poetry project is inspired by several authors but I keep going back these specific books for help: Muriel Rukeyser‘s The Book of the Dead; Seam by Tarfia Faizullah; Bao Phi‘s Thousand Star Hotel; Lincoln in the Bardo by George Saunders; Daniel Borzutzky‘s The Performance of Being Human and Blood Dazzler by Patricia Smith. These books use inventive language and great heart to create politically charged historical and personal narratives that shout out to the present. They read like verse plays.

4. Do you practice any other art forms? If so, do these influence your writing and/or creative process?

Before I took writing seriously, I was an animator. For 20 years I made experimental animated films and worked on commercials and children’s TV shows. I chose animation because it was an interdisciplinary art form that integrated my love of theater, dance, drawing, painting and music. I tend to approach writing as animation made with words, a call and response to other art forms.

5. What projects or pieces are you working on right now?

I’m currently immersed in a poetry project about the garment industry propelled by the 2013 Rana Plaza collapse. When the Rana Plaza building fell to the ground in Dhaka, Bangladesh, killing over 1,134 Bangladeshi garment workers in 5 garment factories and injuring thousands more, I took it personally. I come from a family of NYC garment workers who made a living in garment factories during the time of the Triangle Shirtwaist Factory fire (NYC, 1911) that killed 146 immigrant garment workers, any of whom could have been one of my relatives. The poems I’m writing animate the Triangle Shirtwaist factory fire and the Rana Plaza collapse; bring to light my present day connections with garment workers in Bangladesh and reflect on my role as an American consumer in the fast fashion supply chain.

A group of these poems were originally written as part of a multi-media installation made in collaboration with visual artist Rachel Breen and exhibited at Carlton College’s Perlman Museum and the Sabes Jewish Community Center in 2018.

Photos from reading of Alison’s poems during the Price of Our Clothes exhibit at the Perlman Museum. Artwork by Rachel Breen. Poems by Alison Morse. First photo reader: Sara Paller.

Visit Alison’s website here and follow her on Facebook here.

 

 

An Interview With Literary Agent Noah Ballard

An Interview With Literary Agent Noah Ballard

 

Noah Ballard is an agent at Curtis Brown, Ltd. Noah focuses on literary fiction, short story collections and narrative non-fiction, including memoir, journalism and pop culture.

Writer Lucas McMillan called him up to discuss querying, self-promotion in the 21st century, and how writers can avoid common pitfalls in their first few pages. 

How many queries do you receive per week?

Somewhere between 50-300.

What are some of the most common mistakes you see in a writer’s opening pages?

A lot of writers clear their throats for a couple paragraphs, sometimes a couple pages. They’ll start with, ‘here’s my character, and I’m going to tell you a story.’ But you don’t need to do that. I know this is a book, and that you’re telling me a story through the voice of a character.

Also, I’m personally averse to books in which the first thing we have is a character waking up, or in the middle of an action, or books that start with a line of dialogue. It’s like starting a movie with a black screen and you hear voices but you can’t orient yourself because you don’t know what’s going on.

An author’s voice is critical to hook readers at the beginning of a manuscript — what do some of the voices have in common that have hooked you?

What stands out is that they don’t have that much in common with what I’ve read before. I’m looking at thousands of manuscripts a year, so if you can stand out in those first couple pages, paragraphs, sentences, even, doing something confidently, that’s going to get my attention. It’s all about confidence.

What do writers get wrong most often when they query?

The two things you’re trying to accomplish with the query letter are showing me that you’re a savvy professional who knows how to talk about your work, and that you’re also not at the other end of the spectrum. I see a lot of people using the voice that they should save in their fiction and putting it into the query letter, or on the other side of it people saying this book will be as best-selling as the Bible, or the next The Sun Also Rises, or some book that would not be a useful comparison for me to give to an editor.

What I’m looking for is very brief introduction. Why did you reach out to me? Who are you? What are you trying to sell? Be a professional, and get me to read the pages. Ultimately, I’m not signing a client based on their query letter. The work is going to speak for itself. 

You’ve mentioned in past interviews that writers should know their work is part of a conversation — what do you mean by that?

A certain amount of writing is done in solitude, and away from the world. But when it comes to making the decision to want to become a published author, you have to realize that your book will have to sit somewhere on the shelf and it’s going to be sitting next to other books that people will have read.

I want to know, what other writers are your reading? Who are you inspired by? Who are you talking to when you write this sentence? What are you trying to do formally on the page? It must’ve come from somewhere. You don’t just learn how to be a writer by existing in a vacuum. Part of what my job when I’m talking to editors is to contextualize the work.

What advice would you give a writer pitching you face-to-face at a conference?

Be conversational, be approachable, take notes. Don’t rehearse a pitch or a monologue about your book. Just sit down and have a conversation with me. Ultimately, our relationship is not going to be rehearsed, so we might as well just pretend we’re on a first date or something. This is not an audition. I don’t care how polished a person is when they’re talking about their work. They’re not going to be talking about their work, I’m going to be the one talking about their work.

People get very nervous, and think of me as some sort of omnipotent gatekeeper, when really I’m just a human being trying to make a living selling books to book publishers. I’m just trying to assess, are you defensive and rigid, or are you eager to be a collaborator with me to make this difficult proposition work? 

How do you prefer to work with clients in the editing process?

If it’s fiction, I tend to be pretty hands-on. I’ll typically read the thing, then give a set of macro suggestions in the form of a letter or long phone conversation, or both. Then the writer goes off into the world and comes back to me some weeks or months later with a new draft. Then I’ll print it out, use a pen to mark it up depending on how much work I think it needs. It depends. I’ve had authors that I’ve worked with for years before we’ve submitted the book, and I’ve had authors that really just needed one kick in the butt and then they were ready to submit. For nonfiction, it’s a shorter process. What we’re putting together is not a manuscript but a business proposal.

In your opinion, what separates writers who “make it” from those who don’t?

When you want to get your book published in the 21st century, you have to be shameless about it. Part of the promotion of a book comes down to you reaching out to everyone you’ve ever met and ever talked to and ever worked with and saying, ‘Hey, buy my book.’ Because what you’re doing with every little connection you make is you’re buying a little lottery ticket that this person will tell another ten people to read your book. And then this starts a groundswell of people coming to this book. That’s the challenge of book publishing. It’s a word of mouth industry. You can put a review in The New York Times, or a feature in The New Yorker, or have you on Good Morning America, but ultimately that’s just an opportunity to tell someone to buy this book. What sells them the book is that person going to their book club or dinner with their friends or on Facebook or Goodreads or Twitter and saying, ‘Oh my God, I love this book. You have to read it.’ A lot of authors think there’s some mystery publicity machine that they turn on when your book comes out, but there isn’t. The mystery machine is you.

What are a few things you wish you saw more of in the manuscripts you receive?

A lot of what I see is people trying to replicate the success of something that they admired, instead of being in conversation with something, like we touched on earlier. They’re just trying to emulate. That’s antithetical to what book publishing is. It’s good to show that you’re similar to something, but if you’re the same, people see right through that. They want things to be fresh. 50 percent of the books I see involve hardened, alcoholic cops on the verge of retirement who have to deal with whatever the hip terrorist group is that month, who, ten years ago, killed his wife/daughter/mother. Now he has to stop them from blowing up New York City. You’d be amazed how many people are working on that book.

The premise can be exciting like that, and the premise can be in a trope-y, crime, procedural space, but give me a protagonist that’s somebody different. Give me a younger person, or a person of color, or a queer character. That’s what’s great about the book Motherless Brooklyn [by Jonathan Lethem]. You have a character with Tourette’s Syndrome trying to figure out a crime. It’s still the same proposition, but it takes a new angle on it. A lot of queries I get I want to write back in all caps: please come at this from a fresh perspective.

What’s the best thing you’ve read recently and why’d you like it?

Bad Blood. It’s a fabulous look at how you can do nonfiction like a novel. it’s a ridiculous feat of journalism, and the amount of time he must have put into it is insane. He’s not just summarizing what happened. He’s breaking down scenes of these characters in rooms having conversations with each other. I think that’s why it’s such a huge bestseller, and spawning all these other incidental works. It’s such a compelling story. There’s a way to do journalism, and there’s a way to do something bigger than that. It’s narrative nonfiction that creates dynamic characters going through extraordinary circumstances. It’s a masterclass.

I also recently read Kristen Roupenian’s collection of short stories, You Know You Want This. Short story collections are difficult, but I thought she was pretty inventive formally. I’m not sure anybody would’ve talked about it had it not been affiliated with one of the biggest New Yorker pieces ever. But, at the same time, it’s nice that people are talking about a short story collection as weird and violent and unapologetically feminist as this.

Noah Ballard will appear at the following conferences in 2019:

 

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In The Field: Conversations With Our Contributors–Michael Torres

In The Field: Conversations With Our Contributors–Michael Torres

1. Tell us about your poems, “The Very Short Story of Your Knuckles” and “After the Man Who Found Me Doing Burpees at the Park Said: “I Can Tell You Learned Those on the Inside.”,” in Volume 21. How did they come to be?

After the Man Who Found Me Doing Burpees at the Park Said: “I Can Tell You Learned Those on the Inside,”” began in a workshop led by Marcus Wicker, who was in Mankato for the Good Thunder Reading Series. The experience it’s based off is true. I’d sort of forgotten about it. Rather, I hadn’t thought it was much for a poem until Wicker’s workshop where I realized what the man said had remained, quite vibrant, in my mind.

The Very Short Story of Your Knuckles” was a poem I couldn’t write for years because I needed it to be “perfect.” It became more of a responsibility than anything else. After multiple failed drafts, I shelved it. Years later, while teaching, I wrote on the board “The Very Short Story of Your ________” as a freewrite prompt for my students. I decided to jot some lines myself. It was only after class, that I realized what I’d written felt closer to that very poem I failed at writing for so long. Coming at it from a different angle and without all that pressure to write towards perfection allowed me to discover what the poem itself needed.

2. What excites you as a writer? What turns you off, makes you turn away or stop reading a piece of writing?

Vagueness and untethered abstraction tend to be my writing-turn-offs. Like many writers I know, I love a surprising yet somehow fitting line or image. Those surprises end up being the moments I find myself recalling long after I’ve read the poem.

3. What was an early experience that led to you becoming a writer?

My sister Rose leant me her copy of Luis J. Rodriguez’s memoir, Always Running, when I was fifteen or sixteen and had stopped caring about school because, among other reasons, the books I was assigned didn’t include characters who looked, spoke or lived like me. Those years, I spent most nights spray-painting walls all over town. The memoir deals with identity and manhood as a Mexican-American man. Graffiti symbolized my own struggles with who I was. In Rodriguez’s work, I saw myself. That’s when I realized that being a writer was not only a possibility for me, but that what I had to say could mean something to someone.

4. What are some themes/topics that are important to your writing?

I’m so very interested in masculinity, identity and loyalties. I grew up in a very macho culture. All car parts and boxing gloves under a southern California sun. Now, I’m a poet who lives in southern Minnesota, who teaches in academia. For me, there’re tensions to explore at those crossroads.

5. What does your creative process look like? How does the environment you are in shape your work or where do you like to write?

I like to move around. Mornings, I head to a desk in my apartment’s spare bedroom. I open a draft of a poem because I fear starting blank. I write, revise and stare at the poem for an hour or two. I take a break. Go for a walk. Wash dishes. Return to my desk for a while. I get up and read. I go for a run. I get ready to teach. On days I don’t teach, I hit a coffee shop or the University library. If it’s warm enough, I’ll walk to wherever I’m going to write. Evenings, my wife or I will make dinner. Evenings, I try to relax. I still struggle with the myth that a writer needs to write every day. I do like to “write” every day, though. Walking around with an awareness and openness, with questions, that’s writing. Watching a documentary is writing. Reading over a friend’s poem is writing. Listening to a podcast (Ologies!) is writing. Attending readings in the Twin Cities and thinking about the arrangement of your collection on the drive up is writing. I try not to get to bed too late.

6. What projects or pieces are you working on right now?

I’m very blessed in the support my writing has received this year. As far as poetry, I’ll be spending a good chunk of this summer working on a series of poems that may or may not make it into my first collection. Last summer I began writing what has become my “All-American Mexican” poems. That term—what it could mean, what it seems to imply—has been an obsession since it first came to me. I plan to explore the idea into exhaustion then gather poetry on the return trip.

Through the Loft Literary Center’s Mirrors & Windows Fellowship, I’m working on YA novel—my first long-form endeavor. Currently, that project is in its very beginning stages so all I can say is that it’s inspired by adolescence and the homegirls who I did graffiti with.

Congratulations to Michael on being a 2019 Minnesota State Arts Board Artist Initiative Grant recipient! Visit his website here, and follow him on Twitter.

In the Field: Conversations With Our Contributors–Martha Silano

In the Field: Conversations With Our Contributors–Martha Silano

1. Tell us about your poem, “Hummingbirds of the World,” in Volume 21. How did it come to be?

I’ve been admiring hummingbirds since I was a kid. Over the years I’ve been lucky enough to view them in the wild, and I’ve spent time researching their feats of strength and gorgeous names. I’d been meaning to write a poem about them. Finally got around to it.

2. What excites you as a writer? What turns you off, makes you turn away or stop reading a piece of writing?

What excites me:

1) the utterly new and original;

2) a voice that completely grabs me and won’t let go;

3) Firing on all cylinders – sonically, imagistically, syntactically, structurally;

4) Wow! metaphors and figurative language;

5) I know it’s good because when I get to the end of a poem and immediately re-read it, trying to figure out how they pulled it off.

Turns offs:

1) boooooooooring;

2) tired/clichéd;

3) ho-hum subject matter;

4) not convinced speaker is being honest or accurate;

5) even a hint of pretentiousness;

6) syntax not doing anything interesting;

7) weird line breaks that don’t make sense;

8) piousness/earnest reverence for the natural world.

3. What was an early experience that led to you becoming a writer?

My 2nd grade English textbook included poems by Robert Louis Stevenson, Edgar Allen Poe, and Emily Dickinson. I recall gravitating to those way more than the stuff about who vs. whom, especially when we got to Dickinson. This same teacher also had us write haiku (my first poems) – I wrote a bunch more at home. Also, I grew up on a street adjacent to John Ciardi’s street—it made it seem possible that I could be a poet. My 9th grade English teacher, Edwin Romond, was also a poet, so there it was again: the remote possibility I could join the ranks.

4. What books, writers, art, or artists inspire you and your work? Do–or have–you had any mentors in your writing life?

Some very influential books/writers: Annie Dillard’s Pilgrim at Tinker Creek, Lillian Hellman’s Pentimento, poems by Robert Bly, Gary Snyder, Allen Ginsberg, Gregory Corso, Anne Sexton, Adrienne Rich, and many I’m forgetting. My most crucial mentors were David Wagoner and Heather McHugh—I owe them both a huge debt.

5. What does your creative process look like? How does the environment you are in shape your work or where do you like to write?

My creative process involves keeping a notebook (I write most days), trying to write a poem a week (sometimes less, sometimes more—I do the poem-a-day thing at least two months of the year), and reading a lot of poetry by others. I start to feel out of sorts when I’m not writing/editing towards publication. During the past five years I worked on two separate poetry manuscripts simultaneously—a first. I can write pretty much anywhere, but if I had to choose a favorite spot it would be in a quiet cottage or cabin in a wooded area near water (ocean, lake, river, pond, harbor, etc.). Being in that sort of atmosphere allows me to go deep into the work. Sometimes I’ll write about what’s right in front of me, but more often I will go deep into research/reading, and find myself grappling with subject matter having nothing to do with my location. For instance, at a recent stay at Yaddo, I was in the woods near three ponds and wrote a poem about childhood, a poem about words that have no equivalent in English, and a poem about things I witnessed while sitting on my front porch.

Visit Martha’s website.